descriptive paragraph.

ENGLISH HW; laugh out loud. descriptive enough!?


The blue lake greeted us as we walked together hand in hand. The bright orange moon welcomed us with its beautiful radiance on the salt water. The night sky that stretched across endlessly was filled with millions of stars that looked down on us happily and brightly. They were glittering like floating diamonds, flickering like hot burning fire, winking and winking...


The high moon's rays shone down upon us as we sit down embracing the beauty of nature. As the cool breeze whispered in my ears, it blew my hair to the side of my head and there it layed softly. The rocks beside us layed quietly while we listened to the crickets sing their chirping song that filled the air. Though the smell of the surrounding aroused memories of the past, memories I wanted to forget, it didn't matter -- and it never will. It just made me look forward to the future even more.